Clawbinder

Clawbinder Saira has been trained from birth for this to battle one of the Great Ones and retrieve that precious prize But Rajani is old and clever and like the Great Rocs before her she is wise to the ways of

Saira has been trained from birth for this to battle one of the Great Ones and retrieve that precious prize But Rajani is old and clever, and like the Great Rocs before her, she is wise to the ways of thieves A fantasy short story Clawbinder was first published on Short Story.Me and is now available for the first time as an individual eBook It also includes a shortSaira has been trained from birth for this to battle one of the Great Ones and retrieve that precious prize But Rajani is old and clever, and like the Great Rocs before her, she is wise to the ways of thieves A fantasy short story Clawbinder was first published on Short Story.Me and is now available for the first time as an individual eBook It also includes a short preview of the upcoming novelette Night Feeders , a supernatural western.

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Clawbinder

  1. A writer of both fantasy and horror, Marlena s work is in a smattering of anthologies Her stories lean toward weird horror, creature horror, and YA fantasy She typically thinks up strange tales while sipping sweet tea at her Georgia home, listening to podcasts on her hour long commute, or while reading a good book with her three cats.

226 Reply to “Clawbinder”

  1. Clawbinder reads like the introduction or prologue to a much longer story If this is the case, I think it reads fairly well If it s not going to form the opening pages to something larger then much work needs to be done for it to stand on its own.There s very little character development, or background information provided to fill in the glaring blanks in the story As a short story prologue that s ok, because the gaps will be filled by the detail in the rest of the novel alone, that s not ok.I w [...]


  2. This fantasy short story feels like a set up for a series of novels and if it is, then it s a decent one But while the story line is good, otherwise there s not a lot here, no world building, no character development, and while the twist at the end is nicely played, the lies told by the heroine to reach that twist don t carry the plotline sufficiently Besides, if there s a fraternity of people riding these big birds, why aren t they also breeding them, rather than stealing eggs from the wild one [...]



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